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Post by shalimar on Jun 6, 2006 16:09:18 GMT -5
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Post by Admin on Jun 6, 2006 18:13:36 GMT -5
Petite usually implies small all around, so its not a comparison if she's short. And you said she looks scrawny, but 122lbs on a small girl would hint at a fair amount of muscle, or extra meat on the bones. Yeah, to give you an idea, I'm 5'8", 125lbs, and not considered underweight or very thin by any means. For a girl almost half a foot shorter than me, only 3lbs less would still make her much bigger than "petite". Something closer to 100lbs would probably make her petite. |
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Post by shalimar on Jun 6, 2006 18:57:22 GMT -5
edited that out earlier
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Post by Admin on Jun 6, 2006 19:12:42 GMT -5
With a naturally slim physique, and a somewhat petit look about her, Psylocke may look rather scrawny and weak, she is anything but. Her looks may deceive, but this girl can certainly pack a punch. She is not all that tall, only coming to 5’3” and weighing nearly 122 pounds. |
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Post by shalimar on Jun 7, 2006 9:38:06 GMT -5
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Post by Admin on Jun 7, 2006 9:43:32 GMT -5
Ok, let me try this one final time: "naturally slim" is not 122-lbs when you're only 5'3" tall. "naturally slim" would be 122-lbs if she was 5'8" tall. "naturally slim" for a 5'3" tall girl would be closer to 100-lbs.
As it is worded right now, your character is "naturally chunky".
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Post by shalimar on Jun 7, 2006 9:46:06 GMT -5
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Post by Admin on Jun 7, 2006 10:09:19 GMT -5
Much better, thanks.
The last thing I ask is that you take out the powers she no longer has. If she can't use them anymore and they've been replaced by other powers then we don't have to know about them. It just makes things confusing.
And now I had you over to the others. If you can get a stamp from them, you have mine.
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Post by Pyro on Jun 7, 2006 12:40:19 GMT -5
If the Boss Lady says yes, then so do I.
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