Siren

[Pyro]

Hi there!

My initial thoughts are there's a bit too much of the Jean Grey's about the character, but that may be something that merely comes across in the bio.

There are a lot of spelling errors in the application - could I suggest a more careful re-read and spell check from you?

Will comment more when am not using friend's machine. Sorry about being on holiday this up coming week everyone, I will do what I can to clear waiting stuff quickly.

[Admin]

I agree with just cleaning it up a bit. Other than that it sounds like a solid character.

The only problem is that there is a mutant in the X-universe named Siryn already (spelled different, though) and that might confuse people (I'm assuming your Siren is an OC?). She's the one who screamed in X2 until they shot her, and then Colossus saved her. Anywho, you might just think of another nickname for your character to keep the confusion to a minimum. (Loreli is a common synonym for the type of Siren she's named after)

[magneto]

What exactly happened to the post? All I see is our comments.

[Pyro]

I'd hazard a guess that the original post was removed by the original poster for some reason...